Walt: Recount our experience of Paul Martin's visit to Team 4
Success Criteria (Walt):
Can write detailed paragraphs and use personal voice to retell Paul Martin's visit
Can use interesting words in our writing
Our writing makes sense
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On Wednesday the 20th Paul martin came and told Mr Sommerville's space about making his book and travelling around the world.
We all enjoyed a lot of things Paul showed.
he showed us creative things like making a person walking on the moon someone riding a bike and inspired us into doing what he loves doing.
he showed us creative things like making a person walking on the moon someone riding a bike and inspired us into doing what he loves doing.
He told us some stories of him making his characters he always went to his favourite beach that he always goes to so he saw these 2 men riding on surf boards and he said wow that's a great idea and made his characters riding on surf boards so he wrote a book and done lots and lots of writing and took it to the person who makes books and done.
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