Fishy

Paul martin

Walt: Recount our experience of Paul Martin's visit to Team 4 Success Criteria (Walt): Can write detailed paragraphs and use personal voice to retell Paul Martin's visit Can use interesting words in our writing Our writing makes sense

On Wednesday the 20th Paul martin came and told Mr Sommerville's space about making his book and travelling around the world.

We all enjoyed a lot of things Paul showed.

he showed us creative things like making a person walking on the moon someone riding a bike and inspired us into doing what he loves doing.

He told us some stories of him making his characters he always went to his favourite beach that he always goes to so he saw these 2 men riding on surf boards and he said wow that's a great idea and made his characters riding on surf boards so he wrote a book and done lots and lots of writing and took it to the person who makes books and done.            

Spaghetti

 Walt listen and remember to what we hear punctuate our paragraph.

Last night mum made us spaghetti for dinner. Mm yum mum makes the best meatballs in the world 

my sister remarked i ate lots  of spaghetti ha ha i laughed as my brother spilled sauce all over his white shirt you've got sauce all over your face to my sister added i love how mum makes the spaghetti.  

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Level ten

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Terry wanted to finish level 10 before he goes to bed so he was he was so obsessed with level 10

Terry always wanted to finish level 10 so he can clock all the levels in the game and he knows what's happening in the game.  

He tapped the keyboard and watched the computer as zargot raised his magic wand…

Terry found himself in a cold , smelly dungeon , in front of a surprise magician and a warrior princess.   

WALT: Find and use relevant parts of the text to accurately answer questions

Predict what could happen in the story. Make inferences.

My animation!

Armanielle comic movie from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.

Comic animations.

My Animation!

The perfect breakfast

Walt: Read with fluency and expression identify which sentence in the text best shows the picture Infer what the author is trying to tell us in the story.

Title: Movies

Walt: identify where speech marks go in our writing.

Philip asked mum are we going to the movies today it was the holidays after all first you need to tidy your room and help put the dishes away and then we can go replied mum Philip worked like crazy getting his room cleaned and helped mum with the dishes this is going to be the best day ever ex lamed Philip he was bursting with excitement. 

Term 2 Problem solving

Walt: Use Multiply in Parts to Divide.

Walt: Order Fractions in a set.

Dictagloss

The moon danced upon the ocean as if on a spot lighted stage. the tired old shoe s felt lone son at the back of the closet. the cellphone alarm screamed and Hollerd at me until I finally rolled out of bed.

Similies

walt: use figures of speech in our writing (personification, metaphors and similes)