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Church is a special place and it's apart of your religion and you get to see your family cousins and friends church is a special place because it takes away your sins that you have done and it keeps you bright on a sunday.
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Church is a special place it's apart of your religion and you get to see your family cousins and friends church is a special place because it takes away your sins” that you have done in the past and it makes you feel comfortable that you went to church you don't have to worry if you don't go to church but it's okay if you go to church you will have a brighter day throughout the whole year if you keep on praying and asking god to help you and guide you.
Church is a special community to me because i love to go church every sunday and i enjoy talking to my Auntys Uncles also my grandmas who stay in G I i love to visit my Auntys sometimes but church is a good place for you to go to.
The reason why you should also go to church is you won't stress and you will feel relieved so that is why church is a special place to us and not just for us for your grandpa your papa and your mama also for people who need help
There can be all different kinds of churches there can be a tongan church a samoan church or there can be a cook island church there’s all sorts of churches but it is a part of your religion and a part of your family also your cultures it represents it and shows who you are where you come from and it is a special place to you and your family.
Church talks about you to understand and get a better life for you and help the poor people on the road drive safely and better yourself also to be kind to the people around you and love your neighbours even if they did something bad you have to still be kind to them.
That is why church is the best place to go to and it is amazing.
I hope you enjoyed it .
Hey Mania! I love the way you have finished your work keep it up but make sure you have edited your writing and compare it with your new writing you have not edited but you have done a great job.
ReplyDeleteAmazing work my funny marni i love ur story its real cool i so happy that you weren't being dodgy unlike some people kmm me nah jokes only sometimes but great work
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