Friday, 24 March 2017
edited writing
Edited writing
I hope you enjoyed it .
Church is a special place and it's apart of your religion and you get to see your family cousins and friends church is a special place because it takes away your sins that you have done and it keeps you bright on a sunday.
Explanation:
Church is a special place it's apart of your religion and you get to see your family cousins and friends church is a special place because it takes away your sins” that you have done in the past and it makes you feel comfortable that you went to church you don't have to worry if you don't go to church but it's okay if you go to church you will have a brighter day throughout the whole year if you keep on praying and asking god to help you and guide you.
Church is a special community to me because i love to go church every sunday and i enjoy talking to my Aunts Uncles and my grandmas who stay in G I i love to visit my Aunt's sometimes but church is a good place for you to go to.
The reason why you should also go to church is you won't stress and you will feel relieved so that is why church is a specia place to us and not just for us for your grandpa your papa and your mama also for people who need help
There can be all different kinds of churches there can be a tongan church a samoan church or there can be a cook island church there’s all sorts of churches but it is a part of your religion and a part of your family also your cultures it represents it and shows who you are where you come from and it is a special place to you and your family.
Church talks about you to understand and get a better life for you and help the poor people on the road drive safely and better yourself also to be kind to the people around you and love your neighbours even if they did something bad you have to still be kind to them.
That is why church is the best place to go to and it is amazing.
I hope you enjoyed it .
Old writing
Old writing
Planning:
Church is a special place and it's apart of your religion and you get to see your family cousins and friends church is a special place because it takes away your sins that you have done and it keeps you bright on a sunday.
Explanation:
Church is a special place it's apart of your religion and you get to see your family cousins and friends church is a special place because it takes away your sins” that you have done in the past and it makes you feel comfortable that you went to church you don't have to worry if you don't go to church but it's okay if you go to church you will have a brighter day throughout the whole year if you keep on praying and asking god to help you and guide you.
Church is a special community to me because i love to go church every sunday and i enjoy talking to my Auntys Uncles also my grandmas who stay in G I i love to visit my Auntys sometimes but church is a good place for you to go to.
The reason why you should also go to church is you won't stress and you will feel relieved so that is why church is a special place to us and not just for us for your grandpa your papa and your mama also for people who need help
There can be all different kinds of churches there can be a tongan church a samoan church or there can be a cook island church there’s all sorts of churches but it is a part of your religion and a part of your family also your cultures it represents it and shows who you are where you come from and it is a special place to you and your family.
Church talks about you to understand and get a better life for you and help the poor people on the road drive safely and better yourself also to be kind to the people around you and love your neighbours even if they did something bad you have to still be kind to them.
That is why church is the best place to go to and it is amazing.
I hope you enjoyed it .
kiwi kids
Kiwi kids
WALT: Identify the theme across different texts
SUCCESS CRITERIA: I will know I can do this when I can explain the similarities and differences between two texts
Tuesday, 21 March 2017
The Thrilled Poly-fest
Poly-fest
On Thursday the 10th of march our school went to the poly-fest and we had to sit and wait for the other schools to come because it wasn't fair if we did the activity's by our selves but when they got here my leader was lanz and he was very amazing role model to us so the first rotation we done was going to road safety and we took a photo that made us look like we were actually crossing the road so after that we went to our 2nd rotation and it was about pasifika and what your culture is about and having faith and courage in us so the 3rd rotation was about compost and chucking the rubbish in the right place and then last but not least we all got to do our video with the man for the poi's i had a great day and i enjoyed my self so much after all of that we got to get a bag of glasses sunscreen a fan and some tattoos from the bag we went with Mrs sio and she bought us a mango juice each she bought us raro donuts and she bought us a watermelon ice-cream and it was so delicious so we went to all sorts of stores like Aut the the game place and it was all amazing we also went to watch the Fijian stage and the Maori stage it was awesome and the day was great and then we had to thank all of the helpers for coming and we were so pleased to go to the poly fest. Thank you for Reading my blog post.
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A Serious Game
WALT: Identify the similarities and differences across different texts
SUCCESS CRITERIA: I will know I can do this when I can explain the similarities and differences between two or three texts
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