This blog is a record of my learning from Pt England School in Auckland, through to Tamaki College..
Tuesday, 28 February 2017
Visual Mihi
Kia orana my name is Armanielle and welcome to my visual Mihi and i am going to show you about the things i like my favourite brands are nike and Jordan's because my family likes nike and Jordan and also me. My cultures are cook island Tahitian and maori I love to eat Mc Donald's and i love to have chips and a burger with my family.
I hope you enjoyed
My Role model is my Nan
WALT - Plan for a piece of explanation writing.
- Use the' Title-Introduction-Information-Conclusion (TIIC)structure.
Why My Nan is my role model
Remember the T.I.I.C structure.
Remember the T.I.I.C structure.
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Title - What you will be explaining
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Introduction - Tell your audience what the topic is about and what is to be explained.
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Information - Explain the elements or steps in a logical sequence
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Conclusion - Final summarising statement, an evaluation or comment about what you have explained.
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Title
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How to have a fun weekend
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Introduction
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My Nan Alma is a chef at waimarie hospital and she is a very good cook who knows how to make brownies caramel biscuits and lots of desert’s also look up to her as my role model because she is a very nice lady and looks after me better than anyone else can.
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Information
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My Grandparents are special to other people because they are good and they got taught how to clean and do the chores around the house i have full respect for my grandparents because they care for me especially my nan who cooks us food and gives us money.
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Information
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I look up to my nan because she taught me how to clean and understand the things she’s teaching me.
My nan is teaching me to be a good girl and helping me learn new things.
I love my nan she is a very good role model and she shows me how to do things properly and not rush my job.
The part i love about my nan is she tells us not to get smart behave when we go to people's home also makes sure were full and not bored.
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3rd element
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I am very grateful for living with my nan who loves me and my brothers and sisters and treats us all the same also giving us a programme in our head so we know when we grow up to love,share,care and forgive other people’s sins.
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Conclusion
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I look up to my nan and I will always respect her like how she respects me my nan is a awesome role model and she takes us to the markets if we show her that we can listen and behave at home.
And that's why I want to be like her.
Thank you for listening to my role model hope you all enjoyed.
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