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Tuesday 28 February 2017

My Role model is my Nan

WALT - Plan for a  piece of explanation writing.
                  - Use the' Title-Introduction-Information-Conclusion (TIIC)
                       structure.
Why My Nan is my role model
Remember the T.I.I.C structure.
T
Title - What you will be explaining
I
Introduction - Tell your audience what the topic is about and what is to be explained.
I
Information - Explain the elements or steps in a logical sequence
C
Conclusion - Final summarising statement, an evaluation or comment about what you have explained.

Title
How to have a fun weekend
Introduction
My Nan Alma is a chef at waimarie hospital and she is a very good cook who knows how to make brownies caramel biscuits and lots of desert’s  also look up to her as my role model because she is a very nice lady and looks after me better than anyone else can.

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Information
1st element
My Grandparents are special to other people because they are good and they got taught how to clean and do the chores around the house i have full respect for my grandparents because they care for me especially my nan who cooks us food and gives us money.


Information
2nd element
I look up to my  nan because she taught me how to clean and understand the things she’s teaching me.
My nan  is teaching me to be a good girl and helping me learn new  things.
I love my nan she is a very good role model and she shows me how to do things properly and not rush my job.
The part i love about my nan is she tells us not to get smart behave when we go to people's home also makes sure were full and not bored.
Information
3rd element
I am very grateful for living with my nan who loves me and my brothers and sisters and treats us all the same also giving us a programme in our head so we know when we grow up to love,share,care and forgive other people’s sins.

Conclusion
I look up to my nan and I will always respect her like how she respects me my nan is a awesome role model and she takes us to the markets if we show her that we can listen and behave at home.  

And that's why I want to be like her.

Thank you for listening to my role model hope you all enjoyed.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Armanielle. I really enjoyed reading all about how awesome your Nan is and I agree with you - she is a great role model!

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