Yr 6 camp Writing

Yr 6 camp Writing

At year 6 camp we did lots of fun activities. We had delicious dinner and dancing it was awesome,cool and exciting. We got to go hiking and do lots of other great activities.

My favorite thing about Camp Bentzon was watching the jumping up and around the water. My other favorite things were kayaking, abseiling and sailing.

The funniest part about camp bentzon were our cabins because we all left to go swimming and our room was a complete mess MissTakekrai came into our cabins and said that we had the ugliest cabin when we were having breakfast.

We had to clean it twice on Wednesday then on Thursday we had the second cleanest cabin. Miss takarai said we improved and we did good and then we just listened to music and had fun.

The winner’s for camp concert was Kats and the second team was Kawau and last was my group and that was Mansion. That was a shame that we didn’t put that much effort into it.

And on the last day of camp we had fun and kaden’s mum was playing some awesome music and it was very cool but me and ata had to sit out because we went in the water with toni.

Camp bentzon was the best time of my life and it was cool exciting fun and i was amazed by the ocars and the stingrays.

I had a great time at camp and i wish i could go again this may be the last time i go to camp bentzon i’m going to miss camp and i will never forget the Oscars and the stingrays.

I hope you all enjoyed reading about my camp story i hope when it’s your time to go you can see it to.

And that’s the end of my story goodbye.

Holiday writing immersion

Holiday writing

In the holidays me my aunts,cousins and sisters we all went to rainbow zen and we had lots and lots of fun on the rides we all enjoyed a lot of the times we  had at rainbow zen.

After the rides we  had some ice cream and we all got to choose our own one I got a chocolate ice-cream and my aunts all had a vanilla one and my mum had the same one as my dad they both had a strawberry one and my sisters had a mint chocolate one.

After we had our delicious ice-cream me my mum,dad and aunts all went on the kids kingdom to take me and my brothers It was very awesome that we got to go on the slides and then we had to go with my dad who went somewhere else at the boat ride.      

After that long day we all had a massive feed at burger king and we all came home and had a big rest we all were very full and tired from the big day at rainbow zen. That was the best day of my life ever and the fun bit about it is the clowns there scary.    

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Writing Test e-AsTTle

Bush Test e-AsTTle

One stormy raining morning there were two brothers that went for a walk into the bush they walked and walked and walked.

They lost track of where they were walking so they saw three paths that showed them the way to go and they didn’t know So they were there until the next morning they were trying to find out from where they came from so one of them found an idea and he said to use our map,compass and cookie crumbs.

So they all gathered up their ideas and used the map for where they were going the compass to see where they're at and the cookie crumbs to see from where they were coming from.

So they both found a way and came home safely.

   The End