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Tuesday, 5 July 2016

School art gallery p.s

This term we have been learning about comic art at the art gallery.

Walt: Art gallery

Today we went to the art gallery and my 4 favorite things in the art gallery that i liked.


1. My first choice was team 5 s one because we made comic animation's and a lot of ideas.


2. My second choice was looking at room 21 s one because they had heaps of ideas of the park.



3. My 3rd one was team 4 s one because they made months.



4. My 4th one was Mrs George's class and they were learning about city and buses.

Friday, 1 July 2016

Speech marks

 As soon as Tim got his pocket money, he jumped on his bike and raced'' straight down the shop.

How can I help you? Asked the shopkeeper.
Tim looked long and hard at all the ice-blocks and finally saw a lemonade ice-block please.

Here's your ice-block'' that will be one dollar and fifty cents, said the shopkeeper.

Tim put his money on the counter and headed out the door calling, Thanks very much, as he went.

Monday, 27 June 2016

Fishy

Paul martin

Walt: Recount our experience of Paul Martin's visit to Team 4
Success Criteria (Walt):
Can write detailed paragraphs and use personal voice to retell Paul Martin's visit
Can use interesting words in our writing
Our writing makes sense
On Wednesday the 20th Paul martin came and told Mr Sommerville's space about making his book and travelling around the world.


We all enjoyed a lot of things Paul showed.

he showed us creative things like making a person walking on the moon someone riding a bike and inspired us into doing what he loves doing.


He told us some stories of him making his characters he always went to his favourite beach that he always goes to so he saw these 2 men riding on surf boards and he said wow that's a great idea and made his characters riding on surf boards so he wrote a book and done lots and lots of writing and took it to the person who makes books and done.            

Spaghetti

 Walt listen and remember to what we hear punctuate our paragraph.


Last night mum made us spaghetti for dinner. Mm yum mum makes the best meatballs in the world 
my sister remarked i ate lots  of spaghetti ha ha i laughed as my brother spilled sauce all over his white shirt you've got sauce all over your face to my sister added i love how mum makes the spaghetti.  

 7-10 

Thursday, 23 June 2016

Level ten

Start writing Here:

Jun 8, 2016 8:44:05 AM.jpg Terry wanted to finish level 10 before he goes to bed so he was he was so obsessed with level 10
Terry always wanted to finish level 10 so he can clock all the levels in the game and he knows what's happening in the game.  

He tapped the keyboard and watched the computer as zargot raised his magic wand…

Terry found himself in a cold , smelly dungeon , in front of a surprise magician and a warrior princess.   

WALT: Find and use relevant parts of the text to accurately answer questions
Predict what could happen in the story. Make inferences.