Writing: About a fun school holiday

My idea of a Fun School Holiday
Remember the T.I.I.C structure.

T	Title - What you will be explaining
I	Introduction - Tell your audience what the topic is about and what is to be explained.
I	Information - Explain the elements or steps in a logical sequence
C	Conclusion - Final summarising statement, an evaluation or comment about what you have explained.

Title	How to have a fun school holiday.
Introduction	I Played for the eastern stormz rugby after that I went to the Movies with my Family. I went to Skateland With my Aunty and then me and my whole family.
Information 1st element	I Played for Eastern stormz and we vs Central we won that round  and then we vs west we won that round but our last game was against  south and it was a pretty tough game and it was a very competitive game.
Information 2nd element	We went to the Movies and then we watched Incredibles 2 with My whole family and we were eating heaps of snacks what I loved about the Movies was spending quality time with my family and being together as one.
Information 3rd element	I went to skateland with my Aunty and she took lots of photos and she was really clumsy because she kept falling over and she was so funny when she fell over and we had a race and when she was racing me she fell over.
4th element	We went to the beach with my family and we had hot chips on the sea shore I was so glad that my family was happy and I was so glad that my sibling’s were having a good time.
Conclusion	Last but not least all the things I did in the Holidays was all very fun and so cool I am very Happy that I have had a great time during the school holidays thank you for Reading My story and it should be interesting.lol.